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  1. 2009.03.06 protect wild animals 1
  2. 2009.02.15 The crime rate has been increasing
  3. 2009.02.08 smoking in public places
  4. 2009.02.05 computers could replace the teachers

In the last few decades, industries and technologies have been developed significantly in many countries therefore, it takes away wild animals natural habitats. Some people say that people do not need to protect wild animals since extinction is a natural phenomenon in the ecosystem. This essay will discuss both side of the issue whether people should protect animals or not.

 

 First, many people believe that the money for animals could be effectively spent on the poor. In fact, there are a number of people who are extremely in poverty in the world, they need foods and money for surviving so that, we can help them instead of protecting animals’ habitats. Moreover, even though human being have destroyed habitats of wild animals, it is natural and unavoidable. If people preserve the habitats, natural balance will be broken.

 

 On the other hand, many species of wild animals will be extinct if we do not try to protect them immediately. This problem are happened by human being moreover, this has occurred varied problems such as global-warming, unpredictable weather, and putting a number of animals is in danger. Therefore, if people do not stop to destroy, ecosystem will threat not only wild animals but human life negatively.

 

 In conclusion, it is hard to define human beings are more important than animals since all are a vital part of nature. Thus, it is certain that protection of nature and people should be balanced.

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It is clearly seen worldwide what the crime rate has been increasing significantly. Even though, the government has tried to prevent several types of crimes, it is still occurred in our societies. In this essay, looking at some reasons why the rate of crime rate is high and solutions will be suggested.

 

 According to the development of mass media, people are exposed vary types of violence in media such as TV dramas, movies and games. These can have bad influence on people’s morality especially, immature students. They tend to imitate bad behavior without concern and they cannot distinguish well between ‘do s’ and ‘don’t s’. In addition, these problems come from weak of education in family. We can easily found that missing of parents roll cause of spending most of their time to earn money.

 

 Now, I will suggest some solutions which are possibly working to prevent crimes. Firstly, the government has to make a system. For example, censorship of media is one of method which can get rid of chance to watch violent   programs on TV or Movies. Secondly, the country should put on more heavy punishment, if someone commits crime to nations. The last but not least, moral education have to be executed in many places; school, family and society.

 

 In my opinion, the best aims of people are changed to material things and there is a lot of violence around people, so that the rates of crime are still increasing. However, if the government, families and societies effort together in their ways as I mentiond, we can make the society a better place.

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 In modern society, more people have been interested in problems related to health since people pursue happiness in life. Moreover, it is not only individual issue but society and government concern. Therefore, many people say that smoking in public places should be banned for smokers and others. I strongly agree the opinion and this essay will consider the reasons in several ways.

 The most obvious fact is that smoking is seriously harmful to human body, it could be occurred lung cancer and other diseases. In addition, cause of second hand smoking, it is not only harmful to smokers but others who are not smoke especially, pregnant person. Therefore, many innocent people can be physical and psychological victims of smoking in public places.
 
 Secondly, smoking also possesses social problems and makes spending money. In fact, we have been spent expens to clean cigarette butts and ashes in public places. In other words, our society wastes time and money which is unnecessary costs to keep clean from the disturbance.

 To sum up, smoking is public places is regarded as harmful to people physically and mentally moreover, it requests costs of social expense. Therefore, smoking should be banned in public place.


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 In recent decades, because of development of science and technology, the use of computers has siginificient populority in many part of our lives with no exception in the field of education. Therefore, some people believe that teachers are no longer as important as they were since computers can use for calss moreover, they say that computers will take the place of teacher's position too. However, to my way of thinking, these things are not happen at school and show some reasons in this essay.

 The first and most obvious reason is that computers are not interactive machine like a people. In the calssroom, there are the number of differnt type of students. They have vary thinkings and knowledges. Thus, the fixed informations of computer systemss cannot understand all of them and the students will also not satisfy. In addition, teachers role are not only giving a knowledge but helping them to make a great personality. Threrfore, we cannot expect these things to the computers.

 Another important fact is that the system is not main object but just one of the methods in education. Funtion fo this method is that supporting to the teachers to educate students more efficent ways. This is the main reason to use computers in the classes.

 To sum up, even though, technologies are marked developed, computers are not replace teachers's roles and duties. Moreover, it is a just useful tools to improve student's understanding therefore, computers will not influence on teachers number.
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